Ode to the Hope at Dawn
- tjbaird123
- Apr 30
- 2 min read

Ode to Hope at Dawn
Blue eyes, worn thin by the weight of the night,
hold steady on a line where the world splits in two,
east and west,
a new day a blasted night,
what comes next,
and what will never leave.
To my side, the west smolders.
Brown earth, scorched and torn,
still whispering the violence it just endured.
Smoke crawls upward in slow surrender,
curling into the sky like ghosts that refuse to be buried.
The red of the town lingers low,
glowing in its destruction,
a mournful beacon in the night,
a quiet reminder that chaos does not need noise
to be remembered.
Blue eyes have seen it all.
Every flicker, every fracture, every final moment
that asked for more than a man should have to give.
And yet,
blue eyes turn east.
There, the line softens.
The morning glow begins to push back the darkness,
not all at once,
but enough.
Across distant mountains, the yellow grows,
faint at first,
then certain,
a promise that relieves the soul.
The ridgeline holds both truths at once.
One side carries the cost,
the other carries what remains possible.
And I stand between them,
blue eyes open,
refusing to look away from either.
Because this is the moment that matters,
not the night behind me,
not the unknown ahead,
but the choice to keep facing the light
even when I know what the dark contains.
Blue eyes do not forget.
They do not forgive easily.
But they remain open to see the dawn.
And as the sun finally breaks,
spilling gold across the white,
touching even the edges of what was burned,
I realize an unshakeable truth:
Not everything was taken.
Not everything was lost.
And what remains…is enough to keep moving forward.




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